Chapter Eight: A Question of Honour
Kwame rose slowly, his grin vanishing, replaced by a thunderous scowl, muscles tensing like coiled vines. "You placed the flowers around her shoulders. You took Meralisha under them. You bound yourself before the spirits!"
“A simple misunderstanding,” said Brinn, as he regarded Kwame with a soppy smile.
Here’s the thing – people sometimes misunderstand Brinn’s expression. When he’s trying to be diplomatic (and believe me, it doesn’t come easy to him) he ends up with this dopey expression on his face, and people either assume he’s intimidated (he really isn’t), he’s mentally deficient (okay, so the jury is sometimes out on that one) or he’s being patronising (Brinn is the least patronising person I’ve ever met. He always means exactly what he says). And I could see that right now he had that expression on his face, and Kwame was reading it as Brinn mocking his family.
“You bedded my sister!” snarled Kwame.
And here’s the other thing – arguments aren’t helped by delays, where Mina has to translate back and forth. Brinn would say something, Kwame wouldn’t understand him, and then both men would have to stare at each other and wait for Mina to find the words in the corresponding language. And God knows what important subtleties were lost in translation. And all the while a dark mood was boiling amongst the tribal men and women, and that in turn was making Brinn more defensive. Right now he would be thinking they weren’t listening to him, and they weren’t appreciating just how ‘nice’ he was being about the situation.
This was going to be a bloodbath.
We were all going to die.
Well, maybe not me. Several men in the tribe would seize me as spoils after Brinn was killed, and they would probably end up fighting over ownership of the blonde barbarian. So even more blood. But one surviving man would declare I belonged to him, and then I’d live out the rest of my life as a white slave girl in a river village a hundred pasangs east of Schendi, scrubbing clothes in the river while the free women whipped me for looking like a slut, and then being pushed face down in the dirt and fucked from behind every single night. Thank you so much, Master!
“Kwame – tell your people to stop shouting,” said Brinn. He was growing irritated by the clamour.
At first MIna didn’t want to translate that, but when both men insisted, she did as she was told. “You must be quiet,” she said. I winced.
Kwame’s face twisted in rage. “You took my sister!”
I guess it was considered non-consensual, even if it was consensual, if Brinn hadn’t intended to Companion Meralisha.
“What is he saying?” said Brinn as he looked down at Mina. “Keep up, kajira!”
“He said you have taken his sister by force.”
“What?!” Brinn looked angry now. “She offered herself to me!”
Now Kwame was demanding a translation. When Mina found the words it came out something like, “Lady Meralisha begged him for sex.”
If Kwame looked angry before, he was close to a blood frenzy now.
“Why is everyone being so unreasonable,” snarled Brinn. “I thanked them for their hospitality! They have meat, tonight, thanks to me.”
Do not ever nominate Brinn for a negotiating team.
The elders shifted, spears grounding with heavy thuds, women drawing back with gasps. Meralisha stood now, trembling, tears welling in her dark eyes as the reality crashed over her - abandoned, her honour a broken promise, the village's joy turned to ash. "Brinn," she said, voice cracking, reaching for him. "You said... you promised..." But he stepped back gently, his face unreadable, though I saw the flicker of regret in his eyes - a rare crack in my Master’s armour.
Kwame's hand went to his spear, face twisting with fury. "You thief! You take her purity, her heart, and spit on our ways? You die for this!" The challenge rang out, and the village tensed, ready for blood. Brinn met his gaze, sword hand steady. A challenge to combat. This he understood.
“You want this?” he said to Kwame, his eyes narrowing. “Really?”
The translation came out as “You are a fool to want this.”
For fuck’s sake – I could translate better than Mina!
Meralisha collapsed to her knees then, a sob tearing from her throat, hands covering her face as the weight of abandonment crushed her. "No - Kwame, don't - Brinn, please..." Her hysteria built, voice rising in wails that cut through the night, drawing the women to her side. But the men formed the circle, the duel inevitable now, honour demanding its due.
“This is ridiculous, Tijani. There is no need for this,” said Brinn as he checked the edge and point of his sword, as Kwame did likewise with his spear point on the other side of the clearing. “I’m going to have to kill Kwame, now, and for what? Why is he being so unreasonable?”
Tijani cleared his throat. “And supposing Kwame had taken Cassandra to his bed?”
“Cassandra wouldn’t have gone to his bed,” remarked Brinn, as if the thought was beyond comprehension.
“It is a hypothetical question, friend Brinn. Supposing he had put your sister to use?”
Brinn’s eyes flashed with anger. “Have a care how you speak of my sister.”
“Fine.” Tijani raised his hands in mock surrender. “There’s obviously no point in even discussing this.” Perhaps it was my imagination, but I think Tijani cast me a sympathetic expression, as if to say, ‘I understand now what you have to put up with.”
“I don’t WANT to kill him,” said Brinn as he turned the sword in his hand. “Kwame is a fine man.”
“Perhaps you could just wound him, friend Brinn?” suggested Tijani.
“It doesn’t work like that,” said Brinn. “This is a duel to the death, over a matter of honour. Kwame will expect me to kill him. It would be insulting to show him mercy. How would he be able to face his friends and family if I spared his life? I have more respect for him than that.”
Yes, Brinn really does talk like that. He will think he is doing you a favour as he kills you.
Anyway, I had something I had to say to Mina.
“Your translations are terrible!”
“What?” Mina stared at me.
“You made things worse! You completely mistranslated the inflexion of the words! Are you doing this on purpose?”
“I translated perfectly, kajira! What makes you think you have a better grasp of Ushindi than me? I lived among these people.”
“Then you must have done this on purpose! Everything Brinn said, you made worse – which takes some doing - but you did it.”
Mina stepped forward suddenly and got right up in my face. “Do not accuse me of treachery, kajira!” And then she pushed me backwards. My feet skidded in the slick mud as I squared up against her, my heart beating furiously.
“I’m not scared of you!” I screamed.
“Yes you are,” said Mina, calmly. She stared deep into my eyes and I had to look away. And then she laughed. “Be glad that I find you so adorable, kajira. Even when you are angry with me. You are very pretty. Now run along. The men will be fighting soon.”
Bitch!
I ran back to Brinn. “Please, Master, let me translate for you. Just apologise. Make it sincere. I’ll make it sincere for you!”
“Apologise?” Brinn looked at me as if I was mad.
“You have offended the men. Please apologise Master. Make some sort of reparations.”
“They are clearly too sensitive. Frankly, I am disappointed with them. We shared a hunt together.”
“Kwame is defending his sister!”
“A noble thing for a man to do. I approve very much,” said Brinn as she stared at Kwame. “He is a good man. I shall mourn him later.”
“He might kill you?!”
“Have you completely taken leave of your senses, Emma?” Brinn held the edge of his blade so that it caught the rays of the sun. It was a fine looking weapon.
“What if you die? What happens to me?”
“I will not die. The Priest Kings have not yet determined the day of my passing.”
“It doesn’t fucking work like that!”
“Again you use that crude barbarian word. I seem to recall it is an expletive?”
“Yes! Yes, it fucking is! Master – someone is going to die!”
“Kwame,” he said.
“Or you! You don’t need to do this! Let me translate for you! I can speak on your behalf! Please, Master.”
“There is a time for talking and a time for fighting.” He gazed at my naked breasts and then added with a grin, “and a time for taking slaves in the long grass.”
Incredible. The horny goat was actually considering putting me on my back and having me, just minutes before he was due to fight a duel to the death with a seasoned warrior. The prospect of fighting always made Brinn horny, but even so…
“Master – yes - you can enjoy me instead of fighting! Just say the word and I will run to your furs. I will give you such pleasure… you know I will. But first, let me speak to the men of the tribe on your behalf and then…”
“A moment, Kwame,” said Brinn as he picked me up without warning and slung me over his shoulder, my ass facing front, my head to the rear. “My blood is up. We shall fight to the death, as you wish, but my slave is too distracting. I beg your indulgence.”
I don’t think the tribal men knew what to make of this as Brinn strode into the long grass and tossed me down onto my rump. The groin of his tunic was already ‘tented’ out with a prominent bulge. To their mind he was either insane or so supremely confident he was going to fuck one of his slaves before fighting to the death. Someone should have objected, but even Kwame stared in disbelief as Brinn reached down, pushed me to my back and stripped the cloth from my hips.
“Master – you have a duel…” I squirmed myself up on my elbows as Brinn pulled his tunic from his body. Everyone got a good look at the size of his penis, quivering with need, stiff as a hunting spear as he grinned at me.
“No one is in a hurry to die,” he said as he crouched down beside me and thrust my thighs apart. “Kwame - you may use Chloe while you are waiting, if you wish. I’ll be half an ahn or so.”
The duel circle had already formed in the long grass at the village edge - a ring of tribal men, their dark bodies painted with ochre stripes like wounds from the earth itself, spears grounded, shields at rest, eyes hard and unblinking. Kwame stood at one end, spear in hand, shield strapped to his arm, his face a mask of fury carved from obsidian, betrayal burning in his gaze after Brinn's confession had shattered the illusion of companionship. Meralisha knelt nearby, her sobs muffled now into ragged breaths, her hands twisting in the wilted garland that hung limp from her neck like a noose of broken promises. The village women clustered behind her, murmuring prayers to the river spirits, while children were hushed and kept back. The three moons hung low, their silver light turning the grass into a sea of whispering blades, the river murmuring beyond like a distant judge.
The tribesmen watched in stunned silence, spears forgotten, faces a mosaic of shock and fascination. Kwame's knuckles whitened on his spear, his body rigid, but he did not intervene. The duel had not begun, and this... this was a pale warrior's way, alien and audacious. Meralisha sobbed hysterically, hands clawing at the earth as though to pull her brother back from the edge, her world shattering in the firelight. "Stop… please, serpent spirits of the river, stop this!" she cried, her voice breaking into a plea that pierced the night.
But my Master was oblivious to it all. Brinn entered me then, quick, hungry, deliberate, his weight pinning me to the grass, the blades tickling my back as I gasped, arching beneath him, my hands clutching his shoulders as he moved, deep and unrelenting. The world narrowed to him - his breath hot against my neck, his voice murmuring low, "You’re mine, Emma. Always mine." My body began to respond the way it always did when a man takes me like this. Pleasure coiled tight, helpless and fierce, my cries mingling with the river's murmur, the drums silent now but my pulse throbbing like their echo. Brinn seized my wrists in his strong grip and pressed them down, either side of my head, the way he knew I liked to be held – to be completely mastered. The tribesmen's astonishment hung heavy. Men whispered, "he claims his slave... before death?" but Brinn ignored them, taking me with a warrior's rhythm, each thrust a defiance of the circle, of Kwame, of the spirits themselves.
When it ended, we came together - my cry sharp and breathless, his low growl vibrating through me. He held me a moment longer, breath ragged, then rose, retrieving his scarlet tunic, buckling his belt, picking up his sword and shield. The grass clung to my skin as I knelt again, my breech cloth discarded, body trembling in the afterglow and the chill of exposure. Meralisha's hysteria peaked. her wails turning to screams, her body rocking as women held her back.
Brinn turned to Kwame, sword ready. "Now we fight," he said calmly, as though the delay had been nothing - a mere breath before the storm.
The challenge was accepted in the old Ushindi way - no elders' debate, no spirits invoked, just a circle cleared in the packed earth, ringed by the village men with spears grounded, women clustered behind, children hushed and wide-eyed. Meralisha stood at the edge, her face ashen, hands twisting in her wrap as though to wring the pain from her heart. She knew - oh, how she knew - the risk: her brother, strong as a tharlarion, risking his life to avenge a broken promise she had believed was eternal. Tears glistened in her eyes, but she did not speak. To beg would shame them both.
I knelt at the circle's edge, close to Mina, Saffron, and Chloe. My heart hammered like the village drums, fear coiling in my belly for my master. Brinn was no stranger to blood - he had fought as often as he had fucked slaves, but this was different. This was honour, raw and tribal, with death as the only end. Tijani stood nearby, hand on his own hilt, ready to intervene if the circle broke, but his face was grim. "Fight well, brother," he murmured, despite his feelings towards this unnecessary duel.
Brinn stepped forward, buckling on a small round shield of hardened leather and wood - traded from a Schendi merchant - and drawing his short sword, the blade glinting wickedly in the light. Kwame mirrored him, his own shield broad and oval, etched with river serpents, his spear long and tipped with blackened iron that caught the sun like a promise of pain. He wore only a loincloth, his body oiled and painted, muscles rippling like the river in flood.
The two men stepped into the circle, the crowd falling silent. No words were spoken - no chants, no blessings. Only the jungle's breath: leaves rustling, distant bird calls, the river's murmur like a watching spirit. They circled each other slowly, feet shifting in the dirt, eyes locked. Kwame moved first - a feint with the spear, thrusting low toward Brinn's thigh, shield held high to guard his chest. Brinn parried with his own shield, the impact ringing like a struck drum, and countered with a quick slash that Kwame blocked, the wood cracking under the force.
The fight exploded then, vivid and brutal, a whirlwind of motion that made my breath catch in my throat. Kwame was a storm - his spear lancing out like lightning, thrusting high for Brinn's throat, then sweeping low to hook his leg. He moved with the grace of a jungle predator, feet dancing in the dirt, shield a blur as he deflected Brinn's probing strikes. Once he nearly caught my master - spear tip grazing Brinn's arm, drawing a thin line of blood that welled bright red against his pale skin. The crowd murmured, Meralisha's hand flying to her mouth, her eyes wide with terror and hope.
But Brinn was the sea - relentless, adaptive, his short sword a viper's strike. He closed the distance where Kwame's spear was weakest, shield bashing forward to unbalance the tribesman, blade slashing in arcs that forced Kwame back. The clash of wood on wood echoed like thunder, metal ringing on metal when spear tip met sword edge. Brinn's muscles bunched and flexed, sweat flying from his brow, his grin feral now as he pressed the advantage. He feinted left, drawing Kwame's shield wide, then spun right - a low sweep of his sword that clanged against Kwame's parry, drawing a grunt of pain.
The duel turned savage. Kwame roared, lunging with his spear in a flurry of thrusts - high, low, centre - driving Brinn back toward the circle's edge. The crowd tensed, spears lifting slightly. Meralisha whispered something - a prayer, perhaps - her face twisted in anguish, realizing the man who had claimed her body now fought to abandon her, and her brother risked everything to avenge a love she had thought eternal. But Brinn held, his shield absorbing the blows with cracks that splintered the wood, his sword parrying the spear shaft until sparks flew.
Then the opening came. Kwame overextended - a thrust too far, his shield dropping for a fraction of an ihn. Brinn exploded forward, shield bashing Kwame's arm wide, short sword thrusting low and true. The blade sank into Kwame's thigh, blood blooming dark against his skin. Kwame staggered, spear faltering, and Brinn pressed - another slash across the arm, then a brutal shield slam to the chest that sent Kwame sprawling in the dirt.
The tribesman rose with a bellow, blood streaming, spear raised for a final, desperate lunge. Brinn met it head-on, parrying the spear aside, closing in, sword flashing in a downward arc that bit deep into Kwame's shoulder. Kwame dropped to one knee, shield falling, spear clattering away. Brinn stood over him, breathing hard, sword poised.
Brinn's blade fell - a clean thrust to the heart. Kwame gasped once, eyes widening, then slumped forward, lifeless, blood pooling in the dirt like spilled wine.
The circle fell silent. No cheers, no cries - only the jungle's breath and the river's murmur. Then Meralisha shattered it. She broke from the crowd with a wail that tore through the air like a spear - raw, hysterical, a sound of pure anguish that made my own heart clench. She flung herself to Kwame's body, hands clutching his painted chest, blood smearing her fingers as she rocked him, sobs wracking her frame. "Brother! No, no, you can't - Kwame!" Her voice broke into incoherent keens, tears streaming down her face, body shaking as though the river spirits themselves had gripped her soul.
The village men shifted, spears lowering, faces grim. No one moved to attack. Kwame had challenged, Brinn had won fairly. But Meralisha's hysteria echoed on, a lament that filled the clearing, her nails digging into her brother's lifeless flesh as though to pull him back from the spirits' grasp. She turned wild eyes on Brinn, voice cracking. "You took him! You took everything - my heart, my honour, my brother! Curse you, pale thief - may the river serpents drag you under! May you lose everything you have ever loved!"
Brinn sheathed his sword, face unreadable, blood streaking his arm. He said nothing. There was nothing to say. The duel was done, honour avenged in blood, but the cost hung heavy in the air like storm clouds.
Emma:
ReplyDelete(1) I love the initial picture, of Brinn, armed with a sword and wearing boots, and Kwame, armed with a spear and barefoot, facing each other on a circular patch of ground surrounded by a circle of village men, the title, “A Question of Honour,” the opening sentence, “Kwame rose slowly, his grin vanishing, replaced by a thunderous scowl, muscles tensing like coiled vines,” Brinn’s smiling soppily and Kwame snarling, “You bedded my sister!”
(2) I love the problem with translation, the final sentence before the “Read more >” break, “We were all going to die,” the first sentence after the “Read more >” break, “Well, maybe not me,” and you thinking about the prospect of being a white slave girl in the village scrubbing clothes, the free women whipping you and the men taking you from behind.
(3) After the “Read more >” break, third paragraph, first sentence: “At first MIna didn’t want to …” —> At first Mina didn’t want to …
(4) After the “Read more >” break, fifth paragraph, only sentence: “I guess it … to Companion Meralisha.” —> … to companion Meralisha.
(5) I love Mina mistranslating “She offered herself to me” to “Lady Meralisha begged him for sex,” “Do not nominate Brinn for a negotiating team,” Brinn showing a rare flicker of regret in his eyes, Kwame challenging Brinn, Mina mistranslating “You want this? … Really?” to “You are a fool to want this,” “For fuck’s sake — I could translate better than Mina!” and the men forming a dueling circle.
(6) I love Tijana saying, “And supposing Kwame had taken Cassandra to his bed,” Tijana casting a sympathetic expression at you, “Yes, Brinn really talks like that. He will think he is doing you a favor as he kills you,”you challenging Mina on her translations, she pushing you and calling you “so adorable,” you offering to translate an apology, and Brinn looking at your naked breasts and pulling you into the long grass in front of the villagers.
(7) I love the second picture of you, reclining on the grass, looking bewildered, Brinn offering Chloe to Kwame, Brinn using you and the villagers whispering, “he claims his slave … before death?”
(8) After Brinn uses you, paragraph (“When it ended, …”), fourth and fifth (last two) sentences: “Meralisha’s hysteria peaked. her wails turning …” —> Meralisha’s hysteria peaked, her wails turning …
(9) I love the description of Meralisha and you, Tijana saying, “Fight well, brother,” the description of Brinn and Kwame just before the fight, the third picture, of Brinn’s sword under Kwame’s upraised shield, the description of the duel, Brinn grinning ferally, the fourth picture, of him blocking Kwame’s spear with his shield, the end of the duel and the fifth picture, of the fifth picture of Brinn striking at Kwame’s unprotected neck.
(10) I love Brinn killing Kwame, Meralisha mourning, she cursing Brinn and the final sentence, “The duel was done, honour avenged in blood, but the cost hung heavy in the air like storm clouds.” An excellent, exciting chapter. The way is clear for Chapter Nine to be Preview ‘Chapter Four’ although Lady Taleisha’s reaction to seeing Brinn, the killer of a powerful village warrior in a fair duel, might have to be revised.
vyeh
I wonder what Meralisha's fate will be, as her future with the tribe doesn't seem very promising. Perhaps she will beg Brinn to take her with him... but we all know how that would turn out.
ReplyDelete--jonnieo
I’ll bet Brinn would take her along if she submitted herself to him as a kajira.
DeletePlease don't give him ideas, Master. There are too many slaves in the canoe as it is. :)
DeleteWhy is Mina deliberately mistranslating? She was steering the men to duel and achieved that goal. But why did she want it? Was she hoping that Brinn would be killed? But she belongs to Tijani. Was she hoping that Tijani gets involved and killed too, thinking that a new tribal Master would be better for her?
ReplyDeleteI hope Emma doesn’t let the ‘treachery’ go unresolved and brings it up for discussion with both Brinn and Tijani.
Horrible for Meralisha. I know Brinn won’t feel any guilt for killing her brother or the grief caused to her. But maybe he will listen to Emma a little, instead of thinking with his dick.
The group should get in their canoes and go now, before the shock of what has happened
wears off.
Believe me, Master, I'm going to be raising the subject of the translations with Brinn.
DeleteEmma:
Delete(1) Who is Brinn going to believe, a speaker, who has lived among the Ushindi people, or a jealous kajira who has first heard Ushindi three days ago?
(2) Brinn is a great warrior. All the Priest Kings have to do is point him in a direction. No silly thoughts of self-preservation will deter him in his mission.
(3) I read Treasure of Gor and was pleasantly surprised. There was a lot of adventure, comparable to a Tarl Cabot point of view novel, since the slave girl narrator kept running away or being stolen. The picture on the cover is very misleading. She didn’t fight off a winged monster with a spear. Without spoiling the novel, the protagonist’s solution was worthy of you.
(4) John Norman is 94 years old. Treasure of Gor would be a fitting swan song. It compares favorably to Tarnsman of Gor. There’s even a hint the master of the slave girl narrator might have feelings for her.
vyeh
I figure Treasure of Gor was written by someone else, maybe one of his sons.
DeleteMatt Harris:
DeleteI’d hate to speculate a different author wrote Treasure of Gor simply because the book had a lot more adventure and less philosophical digressions than previous book, but Treasure of Gor was a pleasant surprise.
vyeh
After reading 'Avengers of Gor' in 2021 I began suspecting that JN had enlisted a collaborator. In the three books that have appeared in the present decade - in this girl's opinion at least - the action is surprisingly fluid and the 'philosophising' is mercifully much reduced. If the partner is indeed one of JN's offspring, the Norman family could continue milking the franchise indefinitely.
DeleteIn all honesty, I'm not sure how I feel about that. Emma's tales are *vastly* more entertaining than even the 'best' efforts of JN.
Pipa:
Delete(1) I have Warriors of Gor, which I recently purchased. Based on your recommendation, I’ll read it sooner rather than later.
(2) More “official” books means more readers searching for fan fiction and discovering Emma’s site. While I feel “Emma’s tales are *vastly* more entertaining than even the ‘best’ efforts of JN,” I think the official books appeal to an audience that wants “soft BDSM,” where every slave girl gets her desired master and no good guy dies. In Emma’s stories, honorable Rolfe, sweet Maia and loyal Kwame all die. In Treasure of Gor, even the main human villain survives.
vyeh
Could have other writer take over series. Like what did with Jack Ryan after tom clancy passed
ReplyDeleteObviously, I'm available if they need another writer. I don't think any other writer has my experience in writing Gor novels. ;)
DeleteEmma:
DeleteI’m not sure you have the stomach to replicate the signature nauseous philosophical rants, whether in Tarl Cabot’s thoughts or in the mouth of a newly arrived barbarian slave. And the Gor novels are anathema to your vision of depicting slavery and Gor as harsh. I think in Treasure of Gor, only one major character died and — spoiler alert — it wasn’t human. On the other hand, after you developed Kwame into a lovable character, Brinn killed him.
.vyeh
>At first MIna didn’t want to translate
ReplyDelete>as if to say, ‘I understand now what you have to put up with.”
Same thing as before with the quotation marks
Why does Brinn consider this incident honorable? In most cultures I've heard of, having sex with a woman and abandoning her is viewed as very dishonorable. Brinn in particular has fairly strong ideas of female purity and honor, so it seems out of character for him to suddenly have this laid-back, almost anachronistic (so to speak) idea that sex should be casual and there shouldn't be any strings attached.
Brinn's reaction may stem from his Madonna-whore complex. Throughout the series a very strong dichotomy between pure, chaste women like his sister and slutty sex slaves like Emma has existed in his mind. This is part of his culture in general but he takes it farther than most people. It is so strong that he has only ever been seen to have sex with dedicated sex slaves. He gets upset and uncomfortable by the slightest sign of sexuality in a normal woman who isn't a sex slave. He has never married for political advantage and seems to have no desire to do so, yet he hasn't freed and married his favorite concubine (not uncommon in societies with slavery).
Therefore, my guess is that since Meralisha agreed to have sex with him, Brinn has mentally categorized her as a "kajira" along with Emma, Mina, and Saffron. The fact that she wears less clothing than a woman from the Sardar and dances before men probably doesn't help matters. So in Brinn's mind the fight between him and Kwame was a "kajira canjelne" type of situation. Still, he's an idiot for not knowing how other people would interpret this, especially since he'd probably do the same thing in defense of his own sister. If the plot didn't require him to survive he probably wouldn't have walked out of that village in one piece.
You could also argue that the Sardar people have more effective birth control than the people of this backwater tribe and are therefore more comfortable with casual sex. But Brinn's previous behavior contradicts that.
BloggerofGor:
ReplyDelete(1) Before I go off on my own speculation, in (2) and (3) below is what Emma had to say in The ‘Emma of Gor’ trilogy Appendix, published six months after the final chapter of Panther Girl of Gor, the last book of the original trilogy, describing her intent before writing Mistress of Gor, the first book in the original trilogy.
(2) There would be “some strong female characters (in particular Rachel, Tallia and Erin).” “Emma [would be] a flawed heroine.”
(3) “Brinn was easy to design - he was to be the classic Gorean warrior - the wannabe Tarl Cabot … Brinn would be rigid in his belief systems and he would stay true to the male dominance that defines Gor. There would not be a radical softening of him by the end as I wanted to avoid a ‘love conquers all’ ending where he realises that Emma is his equal and frees her from her collar so that they can ‘respect one another’. I’d allow him to fall in love, but it would remain love on his terms exclusively.”
(4) Strangely, only Emma’s flawed heroine and her “rigid,” male chauvinistic, alcoholic, sex-addicted, adrenaline junkie, Tarl Cabot-wannabe are in the sequel trilogy. One can only imagine Rachel, Tallia or Erin in Emma’s position. Remember, Erin asked for her freedom and Brinn granted it with little discussion.
(5) When Emma was freed to give birth to Brinn’s children, he insisted she wear robes of concealment despite the fact everyone on the estate had seen her naked.
(6) Brinn follows his impulses moderated by his “rigid … belief systems.” He was drunk when Meralisha approached. As a sex addict, Emma isn’t enough. Look at how often he’s had Mina in addition to Emma and Chloe. I think he’s also had Saffron. He was drunk when he confessed he wasn’t companioned to Meralisha. When Kwame challenged him, he followed his codes, which was to fight to the death.
(7) Forget Madonna-whore or mental categorization. He’s not that deep. When Tijana tried to use Cassandra as a hypothetical, first Brinn said Cassandra would never have sex with Kwame, conveniently forgetting she chose Simon, and getting angry when Kwame pressed the hypothetical. Nothing in his belief systems says it’s wrong to have sex with a free woman and abandon her. If she doesn’t share a Home Stone — does his estate have its own Home Stone? — with him, then he can rape her.
(8) Brinn is very casual about sex on his estate. He has sex with any kajira that catches his fancy. Since there are no resident free women, that means any women.
vyeh
Tal Emma,
ReplyDeleteSo just wondering who Gerallt is bedding now back on the Estate?.
Is he managing Estate matters in Bryn's absence ?
Who is Acting First Girl?
Shannon? Candice?
Dafydd
Hello, I love your work..... Thank you for introduce me to this world chain sister
ReplyDeleteUp early and at yourchores Ihope Nadia!
DeleteDafydd