Tuesday 9 July 2019

Kiera of Gor (13)

13: We arrive in Port Kar where the Lady Marissa is plainly shocked by the accommodation available to her. The mission for Samos becomes clearer to us all.

My mistress wasn't going to be happy with this, I thought, as we both gazed into the small compartment that was to be our new home in Port Kar in the short term. If anything it was actually smaller than the cramped space I had once rented in mega-expensive London just before I was enslaved and shipped to Gor. The room was partitioned with a folding screen down the middle to give the illusion that it might in actual fact be two rooms.
The section Marissa stepped into was big enough for a low writing desk, some scatter cushions and a cabinet. Behind the screen was a simple couch bed next to a small window that overlooked the other shared residential buildings and canal bridges of the city. Walkways intersected the stone buildings and as we gazed outside we saw two great tarns sweeping majestically through the city with Port Kar warriors armed with long spears astride the back of the birds. It was a sight I was still not used to as a girl from Earth. It was still difficult to come to terms with the fact that Gor was a relatively primitive world of swords and winged monsters and danger lurking around every corner.

My mistress was wearing her merchant caste colours today, which for her caste was white trimmed with gold designs. She wanted to make a good impression I think because applying for residency in a shared building block is something of an interview process as the other women wish to ensure that you are virtuous and unlikely to bring shame upon their house. She was therefore beautifully and properly dressed, gloved, heavily veiled with a full floppy hood and could only walk at a slow pace, so constricting were the layers of garments. I always liked it when she was heavily veiled because unless she was looking directly at me, she would have no idea through that narrow vision slit what I was doing. Her peripheral vision was non-existent. Brinn had been visibly impressed by how dignified she looked and had been particularly nice to her as a result. I began to discover that Brinn's treatment of a free woman depended very much on the degree of propriety she displayed. When she looked like this, Brinn was proud to be with her.

“Well it looks clean,” suggested Brinn helpfully. I think he too understood how cramped the accommodation was compared to Marissa's expensive apartment in Corcyrus, but here in Port Kar land and floor space was at a premium, for much of the city was built on a lagoon surrounded by canals from the vosk delta. Port Kar citizens got round the problem by building upwards, cramming additional storeys onto existing buildings due to the shortage of land that sat safely above sea level.

Port Kar is a Gorean city resembling Venice established on the Thassa, which is the main sea of known Gor. The word Thassa literally means sea or ocean as Goreans know of no other. Kar itself is located in a humid, tropical climate and situated near the Vosk delta marsh on the Tamber Gulf. Its reputation has been established over many centuries as a trading port but also more fearfully as a den of outcasts, outlaws, cutthroats and scoundrels, welcoming the types of men that other cities might reject. The strength of the city lies very much in its shipping and by shipping I mean pirate fleets, as well as more traditional grain fleets, oil fleets and slave fleets. Since Gorean year 10120 (corresponding thereabouts to 1970 in Earth chronology), the ships of Port Kar have enjoyed something of an equivalent naval superiority and strength in numbers as those of the Ubarates of Cos and Tyros.

The city is ruled not by a Ubar or a Tatrix, but by a Council of Captains, and eligibility for a seat on the council is a factor of how many ships and men you command. It is the only city on Gor built by slaves, and it is also the only city constructed completely without towers or cylinders.

A popular saying on Gor is that 'the chains of a slave girl are heaviest in Port Kar'. It is likewise said that no slave has ever escaped from Port Kar. I suspect the last statement is untrue, except for the fact that if a girl did escape Port Kar she would then fall slave to the rencers who dwell in the vosk delta outside of the city walls. Escaping one collar for another is I suppose not really escaping.

Port Kar is also the home of the only caste of thieves in all of Gor. The Caste of Thieves maintain power in the lower canals and perimeters of Port Kar where sane men and women fear to travel. The scar of their caste mark is a tiny three-pronged brand burned into the face in back of and below the eye, over the right cheekbone which they wear with pride.

One aspect of the area around Port Kar is the Vosk delta marsh. The delta is often referred to as Port Kar's strongest wall since it makes an infantry assault from the east practically impossible. A sea borne assault is also difficult as the city has a heavily walled perimeter that faces out to the Thassa. I say walls, but they are not continuous walls in the castle tradition, but rather a series of interlinked fortifications built to safeguard individual holdings. These structures primarily have no windows, though they might possess narrow slits. The outer walls are commonly several feet thick to prevent someone from easily breaking them down. The roof tops often have crenelated parapets to protect bowmen and defenders firing down from those roofs.

The nearest solid land lies around 100 pasangs to the north of Port Kar and here the city maintains logging outposts guarded by slave hunters and trained sleen. With little timber to hand in the vosk delta marshlands, Port Kar is completely dependent on woodland preserves established in the northern forests to provide enough timber to build their ships. Commonly, Tur wood is used for galley frames, and beams and clamps and posts, and for hull planking, whereas Ka-la-na wood serves for capstans and mastheads. Tem-wood is used for rudders and oars and the needle trees and evergreens are carved and shaped for masts, spars and cabin and deck planking. The men of Port Kar also purchase wood from the Forest Peoples in the winter when the logs can be shipped by sea. If Port Kar has one vulnerability it is its reliance on an extended supply line for overseas timber.

The Lady Helena gave Marissa a heavy iron key to the room. On this floor of the building she was the woman responsible for overseeing administrative matters and disputes amongst the residents. She had escorted Marissa on arrival, assigning her to one of the basic living spaces. “There are communal showers on this floor that you can use for free, fed from a water tank housed in the roof. The floors of the building are segregated so only women occupy this level. The water is heated for the fifth and sixteenth ahns of the day. At any other time the water will be cold. If you prefer to bathe there are public baths close by, but they charge a fee and you will have to travel there by either a gondola or walk across several bridges. You will need an escort for that, or arrange to travel in groups with other ladies. There is a laundry room in the basement of the building. The wash tubs, mangles and irons are free to use, or you can pay for a house owned slave to do it for you.” Helena turned to regard Marissa for a moment. “What is your Home Stone?”

“Corcyrus, the silver city of central Gor,” replied Marissa. She took the few steps to the cabinet and opened it. There was room inside to hang her robes and gowns and some shelves to store linen and towels, but little else. She closed the door again, no doubt wondering how she was going to fit all her possessions inside the single wardrobe. “The room is very small.” So much for Marissa's usual life of glamour, I thought. The town house in Corcyrus had been lush and opulent, but here in Port Kar there was a shortage of reasonably priced accommodation for people arriving at the city. Brinn of course would be seeking accommodation elsewhere – possibly in one of the male segregated floors here. He had been permitted to accompany Marissa to view this floor, but Lady Helena had made it clear he wasn't to wander off on his own.

“Be thankful you have secured a home at all,” Said Helena. “You’re in Port Kar now, where land is precious, not surveying the sweeping vista of cylinders in your home city. Some men and women find they have to share common rooms, segregated of course for their own sex, with just spaces chalked out on the floor for their personal sleeping areas. Be grateful for what you have.” Helena paused to consider what else she needed to tell the foreigner. “As this floor is segregated for women, you may robe and veil yourself a little more informally, but when you venture beyond the floor you will require appropriate street wear. I don’t know what standards are like in Corcyrus, but here they are very strict. Are you likely to be free companioned in the near future?”

“Brinn here has shown me much kindness and attention of late,” said Marissa as she placed her gloved hand lightly on Brinn's forearm. “We have spoken of that possibility in the near future. Who knows what may happen if the Priest Kings choose to bless us?'

“Be that as it may, you are not free companioned now, and in any event I should inform you that the city of Port Kar is unique among the cities of Gor in that the practice of free companionship isn't legally recognised here.” said Helena. “Should you wish to socialise with this man, you will of course do so away from this floor. I might add I take a dim view of free women socialising with men unless they consult with me first and arrange a chaperone.”

“Consult with you first?” Marissa looked shocked at the suggestion. “A chaperone?”

“Yes. If you wish to reside in this building you will comport yourself with a higher regard to decency than I suspect you hitherto have been used to in the city of Corcyrus, girl. Your city has a... reputation...” She glanced at Brinn's deeply muscled body and then glanced back at the soft gloved hand that Marissa had placed theatrically on Brinn's forearm. “Remove that hand, please. There will be no such frivolous demeaning behaviour while you reside here!”

Marisa looked shocked as she removed her gloved hand. I could tell she wasn't used to another free woman dictating her behaviour.

“My apologies, Lady,” said Brinn with a diplomatic smile. “You are quite right to insist on such fine standards. The Lady Marissa is young and sometimes forgets herself. I assure you her behaviour is always dignified. The touch of her hand in public was a rare slip in her otherwise faultless character.”

“We shall see,” said the Lady Helena. “Time will always tell.” She then returned her attention to Marissa. “I’ll also tell you what I tell all the women on this floor, Marissa. While your life is of course your own, your comings and goings will always be noticed. We are a close knit group. Very little remains private. A woman who for example was absent from her room during the night will always be the subject of gossip in the morning. Where was she, the other women will ask? Why did she not sleep in her own bed? Did she perhaps sleep in some other bed? Do you understand what I’m saying here?”

“I beg your pardon?” said Marissa, her shock deepening.

“I will therefore expect you back in your place of lodging by the eighteenth ahn every night. We measure this with a simple token system. When you leave the building, a slave will remove a tag from a hook that corresponds to your room and give it to you. When you return, you hand the tag back to the slave who places it back on the hook. At the eighteenth ahn I will inspect the wall hooks to ensure that all my ladies reside safely and modestly in their bed chambers. A report will be made of any tag not in its place by that time. Penalties apply for non-compliance.”

As I have mentioned before, the Gorean day is divided into twenty ahn, each corresponding to approximately one hour and twelve minutes of Earth time. On that basis the Lady Marissa would be expected to return to her room sometime before ten o'clock at night.

“This is very inconvenient! I may wish to stay out far later than that!”

“You may request permission from me to delay your return by say an additional ahn, but I will expect clear details of where you are going, why you will be out so late, when you will be returning, and confirmation you will be escorted safely home. This is for the good of your reputation, and our reputation.”

“This is insane! I will not be subject to such stringent rules! I am paying a lot of money for this tiny room!”

“You are of course free to pay the exorbitant sums for a house of your own which will not be subject to communal standards, or perhaps if you wish to save money you can rent floor space in a shared room where your personal sleeping space will be outlined in chalk. The lack of privacy in such a place is outweighed by the fact that no one monitors your comings and goings nor, should I add, your personal safety. It is not unknown for a free woman to be woken quietly in the darkness with a hand over her mouth and another hand undoing the fastenings of her gown.”

“Are all shared occupancy buildings for free women in Port Kar like this?” exclaimed Marissa.

“This is one of the more liberal ones,” said Lady Helena. “We are renowned for not being overly intrusive. You will find the other women here friendly, provided you maintain an expected level of dignity. We are mostly of the scribes which as you know is a high caste unlike your own middling caste. If you look bad, you make the rest of us look bad. Make us proud of you and we will be good friends. Remember, you are a woman of Port Kar now. We are not like the degenerate women of Ar with their progressive attitudes. We appreciate tradition and decency.” Helena indicated Marissa’s waist, where her street robe was belted. “This is the sort of thing I’m talking about. The belt shows off the curves of your body, the slimness of your waist contrasted with the line of your hips. It is not appropriate in this building and certainly not safe for you out on the streets. Kindly remove it.”

“It's just a belt! I look pretty wearing it! I like to look pretty!” said Marissa as she grew more annoyed now by the minute.

“Pretty?” said Lady Helena, as if such a word in the context of free women was vulgar. “Why do you wish to appear pretty?”

“I just do! I'm a grown woman. I have the right to wear nice things.”

“Do you do so in some contrived fashion designed to attract the eyes of men?” suggested Lady Helena with a trace of concern in her voice.

“Um no, of course not... that thought hadn't even occurred to me.”

“We had a woman here once who wanted to look... pretty...” she said with a sneer.

“I'm sure she was a very respectable free woman with a high degree of modesty,” said Marissa.

“She was a slut and the building residential committee reluctantly reported her to the city magistrates for lewd and inappropriate behaviour. She serves now in a penal brothel for the term of a year.”

“I'm not sure this is a suitable building, Brinn,” said Marissa, turning to him in alarm. “I think I may look elsewhere.”

“Oh, why is that, Lady?” asked Brinn in all innocence. “They seem to have remarkable standards.”

“I... I don't like the décor...”

It was late afternoon as we left the building. My mistress had rejected the room in the end and I could frankly understand why. I hadn't realised that life could be quite so restrictive for the average free woman on Gor. Luckily for my mistress she happened to have considerable funds to fall back on if she wished and so she could afford something better.

“I'll simply rent a private residence that I can utilise alone,” said Marissa as she still fumed from the way the Lady Helena had spoken to her. “I am not going to put up with those ridiculous restrictions on my lifestyle!”

“That will be expensive, Lady,” said Brinn.

“Well, I am a woman of considerable means, and I'm prepared to pay a large sum of money rather than subject myself to the random whims of that harridan. I suspect she is as ugly as a sand sleen beneath those veils and thereby acutely jealous of me!”

“It is possible, I suppose,” said Brinn.

“I mean, you have seen me unveiled. You can understand why a squat, shrill urt of a woman would be jealous of me?”

“These things do happen, I suppose.”

“And did you hear what she implied about my belt!”

Brinn gazed at her slim waist, and observed how the belt acted much like an outer girdle in subtly enhancing the soft curves of her very feminine figure. “You could wear your gowns a little looser, Lady. In my opinion.”

“There is no need. I am already quite modestly garbed by polite society standards,” said Marissa. “See, not even a hint of ankle, and my wrists are quite well concealed with these gloves. It is not my fault if I have a well proportioned figure. It is the body I was born with.” We had walked now across a few of the canal bridges and had found ourselves trailing randomly through a public plaza.

I thought the body she was born with was perhaps a little too curvaceous and could easily be mistaken for the body of a slave when she was undressed down to just her white slip. I had seen her undressed every day of course, so was very familiar with the shape of her hips, waist and breasts. She would definitely look good on a slave block in a display chain. The thought amused me and so I lowered my head as I did not wish to be seen smiling.

“Kind master, kinder mistress, may I draw your attention to a possibly life changing experience of sophisticated culture and entertainment,” said a jovial looking man with a Dutch style beard and moustache and a discernible paunch beneath his opulent flowing robes of various colours as he pointed to a poster design that he had obviously just pasted onto a nearby wall. It was advertising something, but of course I couldn't read any of the words. The picture however suggested a stage of some kind.

“Can I help you?” said Marissa with the usual polite disdain she reserved for the vast population of Gor that weren't handsome, virile, muscular men. “If you're selling something, I'm not interested. I have all my gowns and slippers hand made for me by a tailor from Ar.”

“Dear Lady, I am no mere salesman who seeks to lighten your purse with his trivial trinkets and inferior cloths, but rather I speak to you now of course of the Boots Tarsk-Bit troupe of travelling players, raconteurs and our cornucopia of wonderment! I, as luck would happen, am that self same Boots Tarsk-Bit, owner, proprietor and muse to my skilled artisans.”

“You’re vagrants then?” suggested the Lady Marissa, rather unkindly I thought.

“By no means, wonderful Lady. Actors! Thespians! Archivists of the spoken word! We tread the boards and perform shows of contrasting emotions, upholding the virtues of the sacred performance that is…” he held his breath dramatically for a moment, “theatre!”

“So, travelling vagrants?” said the Lady Marissa again.

Boots looked hurt by the word association and handed her a stencilled sheet with a simple drawing on it of a stage. There were some words that I couldn’t read, presumably detailing the location and times of his performances in Port Kar.

“I am rather partial to theatre,” said Brinn aloud.

“Are these plays of a ribald and offensive nature?” enquired Lady Marissa suspiciously as she scrutinised the handbill. “The theatre in Corcyrus for example has a somewhat lowbrow reputation and the subject matter is often demeaning to free women.”

“By no means, dear Lady! In my latest production, ‘the forest of transformation’ we explore serious themes pertaining to the nature of virtue and the contrasting dispositions of free women and a, shall we say, mischievous slave girl who seeks to play a trick on her fine mistresses.”

“I like plays like that,” said Brinn as he grinned. “Can you elaborate on the plot?”

“Indeed, Sir. Two charming and independent Ladies with intrepid and wilful natures stray by chance from their caravan and become scared and lost in a forest. What are they to do? What dangers will they face? Are there outlaws or panther girls close by who might wish to seize these fine ladies? With them is their slave, a low born girl lacking the finer virtues and superior character of the ladies of course,” said Boots, directing the last words to Marissa.

“Of course,” said Marissa. “There is no comparison between free women and slaves. A gulf as wide as the Thassa separates them.”

“So succinctly put, dear Lady. Truly you have an aptitude for the complex allegories in which I deal, and I think you even begin to approach my skill with word play.”

“The women in the play… they are inspirational role models for free women everywhere?”

“In a sense, Lady,” said Boots as he raised his eyebrows in surprise. “Their complex characters are accurate portrayals of free women in my opinion, so I suppose they might prove inspirational to some women who share their, ahem, innermost turmoils...”

“I have no idea what you're talking about,” said Marissa at length. “Will there be vulgar nudity?”

“Nudity?” Boots looked surprised by the accusation. “Dear Lady, I am an artist!”

“Well, the theatre in Corcyrus has a reputation for ridiculous plot twists that result in supposedly free women losing all their clothes.”

“Does it?” Boots seemed surprised by this. “And the dear ladies of Corcyrus have to put up with such things? How dreadful!”

“It is,” said Marissa in agreement. “You can understand my concern then when you began talking of a play.”

“Indeed! But of course! I see now your concerns and fears. How right you are to be suspicious!”

“I actually like those kind of plot twists,” said Brinn. “They do not seem ridiculous to me, but rather convincing, well written and acted.” Boots winked knowingly at Brinn when Marissa's attention was momentarily distracted by something and Brinn nodded back, seeming to understand now.

“The good lady may be interested to know we will also have a side show of sorts including a juggler!'

“I loathe jugglers,” said Marissa with a sniff of disdain. “There is no skill in throwing coloured balls in the air.”

“True enough,” said Boots, “though I suppose the true skill lies in catching them again, repeatedly. There will also be a sword swallower from Anango and a magician!”

“I like magicians,” said Brinn. “I saw one once who was capable of stripping the silken slip under garment of a free woman from her body without first removing her outer gowns. Quite remarkable. It was a woman in the audience and you should have heard her cries of dismay as she identified the garment and felt its absence from under her robes. She ran home immediately, clutching the silken slip to her body in shame. How we laughed...”

My mistress rolled her eyes and gazed at Brinn as if he was gullible. “Did it occur to you that she was not really part of the audience but rather an assistant planted there by the magician?”

“Not at all,” said Brinn. “He came from Anango, so he was a real magician. Everyone knows that.”

“We have no time for this,” said Marissa as she returned the hand bill to Boots. “Come, Brinn, Kiera, let us find a cafe where we may enjoy a cool drink and consider our work here.”

We found such a cafe that permitted free women to enter. It was situated a couple of streets away from the ribbon canal. My mistress found us a place to sit beside a low table and she ordered drinks for herself and Brinn and a pan of chilled water for me.

“Where do you wish to begin, Lady?” asked Brinn.

“At the beginning, I suppose.” Marissa produced a small packet of papers that she placed on our low table. She then, to the surprise of Brinn, began to remove her thin gloves – those soft gloves that concealed the skin of her hands and wrists.

“Is there something wrong?” said Marissa with a knowing smile behind her veils no doubt, for Brinn's gaze was now fixated on her slim wrists, clearly visible from the billowing silk sleeves of her outer gown.

“No.” He looked slightly uncomfortable but couldn't help himself gaze at wrists that would look beautiful locked in slave bracelets.

“It is a hot day,” said Marissa. “My hands are warm. Forgive me.”

“It is... nothing... Lady...” said Brinn as he tried to look away.

“You have permission to gaze on my slave, Keira, if that helps to distract you,” said Marissa pleasantly, clearly relishing this, for she knew I think the effect on a Gorean man when a free woman casually removes her gloves to reveal those wrists and hands. It is a strange fact of Gor that when free women are fully clothed men rarely give them a second glance other than to speculate what the woman might look like beneath the heavy layers of cloth. Their eyes tend to prefer the sight of slave girls such as myself, and this is understandable as we are generally scantily clad, if at all. But when a free woman modestly reveals a little of herself, it has an arousing effect on a Gorean male. I suppose there is an element of the peek-a-boo tease commonly found in burlesque theatre on Earth. Gorean men are strangely hypnotised by small glimpses of a free woman's body when modesty fails her. They are drawn to it like moths to a candle flame and seemingly can't help themselves. My mistress knew precisely what she was doing here, and in some parts of Gor this is viewed as broadly permissible if a woman wishes to attract the attention of a possible suitor. Some cities however feel the opposite, that it is too risque, and that a woman takes a step too far by removing her gloves in front of a man. I have no idea which side of the argument the men of Port Kar stand. A beautiful free woman can be considered something of a forbidden fruit to a Gorean man, and his natural biology makes him desire her simply because society says he cannot have her, unless it as is a capture and then she is reduced to slavery. Be that as it may, despite the fact that Brinn could easily feast his eyes on my scantily clad body, or the similarly clad beauties within this cafe, he was hypnotised now by the Lady Marissa's bare wrists and she knew it. What power free women have over men! I have seen so many men put up with all manner of rudeness from a free woman, simply because she is a free woman. And yet she walks such a narrow tightrope at times. One slip in decorum and her fate is somewhat less safe.

“Men,” said my Mistress with a soft ripple of laughter. “One glimpse of a slim wrist and you are all the same.”

“Can we get down to business,” said Brinn as he gazed at me instead. I smiled at the handsome master and sucked in my stomach as I knelt demurely in tower.

“Of course. You are probably wondering why Samos has entrusted this mission to me, a woman.”

“The thought had crossed my mind,” said Brinn as his eyes flitted again quickly to regard her wrists.

“These intelligence reports pertaining to whispers, rumours, first and second hand accounts, all seem to suggest a long standing conspiracy has arisen in Port Kar. People have been approached. Questions have been asked. Money has been offered. The incidents taken in isolation mean nothing of course, for plotting, bribery and scheming are all well established factors of politics in Port Kar, but when a brilliant mind such as Samos's begins to connect these stray whispers... well, a pattern of sorts begins to emerge.”

By now I had gathered that this Samos was an important man within Port Kar, and that he sat on the Council of Captains, owned many ships and traded in slaves. His name had often been mentioned in conjunction with another powerful captain of Port Kar, a man called simply 'Bosk'. This was a curious name to me for I had long ago learnt that a bosk in the Gorean language is a huge, shambling wide horned and shaggy beast with a bumped neck, a wide head and tiny fierce red eyes. They are bred for meat and hides and are similar to cattle on Earth I suppose. The reason why a man might have such a name eluded me.

“I see. But that doesn't explain why Samos wishes you to investigate.”

“Some of these rumours paint an unusual picture if indeed they are true. Samos believes that this conspiracy within the walled enclaves of Port Kar is female led.”

“Really?” Brinn seemed astonished at the suggestion. Perhaps he would have scoffed at it except for the fact this was the belief of the man called Samos, and Brinn seemed to hold this Samos in high regard.

“If so, these women will be wary of any approaches from men they don't know, but maybe more receptive to similar approaches from me.”

“I suppose that makes sense,” agreed Brinn. I noticed he had glanced at Marissa's wrists again.

“Samos is wise in the ways of conspiracies, Brinn. He has tasked me with coming to the attention of these women who scheme in the shadows.”

“A strategy with inherent risks for you,” said Brinn.

“I am not afraid,” said Marissa. “I work for Samos. I will hopefully then be contacted, furtively at first, perhaps to consider my loyalties to the city, and then perhaps I will be evaluated, eventually to meet in person members of this conspiracy.”

Brinn nodded in acknowledgement. “We may have had some points of difference until now, Lady,” said Brinn, “but I will always acknowledge and respect bravery when I see it. I commend you for what you are about to do for the Priest Kings.”

“Thank you, Brinn,” said Marissa as she gently placed a bare hand on his forearm in gratitude for his compliment. I almost felt the hairs on the back of Brinn's neck go up as he felt her naked touch for the first time. His natural instinct would surely be to throw her onto her back, strip the cumbersome garments from her body and use her for his pleasure, but I could see he maintained control and simply glanced at the touch with his eyes.

Quickly, my mistress removed that hand as if she hadn't considered what she had done. “Forgive me. I am not used to such gallant compliments. Especially from a man with such a magnificent reputation amongst our profession. I shouldn't have...” For a moment she gazed into his eyes and then quickly looked away, blushing. The effect wasn't lost on Brinn as I saw him adjust his seated position, possibly to conceal what had to be a growing erection now.

“I understand, Lady,” said Brinn as he now squeezed his hands into fists of frustration. If ever I saw a man wanting to seize and use a woman, this was it.

I think my mistress was now walking that very narrow tightrope with Brinn... 






14 comments:

  1. Emma,
    Lady Marissa certainly looks unhappy to me and possibly also very frustrated. I know you are not exactly in a position to be entirely objective regarding her feelings, but I wonder what kind of solution might present itself? I really have no desire to see her remain enslaved, but it appears the society and culture she lives in as a free woman doesn't give her opportunity for true fulfillment. Perhaps, if she had the opportunity at some point in the future to spend some time on Earth, the experience could be useful?

    Mick

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    1. Now that's an interesting thought, Master – just how would a free woman of Gor cope with the complete and absolute culture shock of being taken to modern day Earth? Would our world be too much for the average Gorean woman to deal with?

      Marissa is certainly frustrated, Master. I had a lengthy conversation with her when we were tied together and dropped into the lagoon by Elizabeth Bentley in Shadows of Gor. Because she thought she was going to die she finally said all the things she had previously been too scared to admit to even herself. If she is a collared slave now, I wish her a happy life, or as happy as it can ever be for her.

      I still remember the horror on her face as Simon left her there. I think the reality of slavery will be very hard for Marissa, at least in the early months. Still, who knows. We haven't seen what happened next yet...

      I'm finding it interesting reading Kiera's account of what happened before I arrived at Port Kar. I wish I'd known it all at the time of course!

      I'd be interested in your opinion of Marissa, Master. Do you think you would have liked her if you met her?

      I notice you seem to have some sympathy for Kiera's plight... do you think you would actually free Kiera if she was kneeling before you and it was in your power to do so?

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    2. Greetings Emma,

      I do indeed have some sympathy for Kiera because she was helping a friend when the situation went badly awry. Being in the wrong place at the wrong time resulted in a hasty and unjustified downgrade in her status.

      Would I actually free Kiera if I could? It depends on the circumstances. In Shadows, outside the slaver's house, if Marissa had been freed by Simon after your entreaties on her behalf, I would have acted. I would have made Simon a good offer for Kiera. Afterwards, I would have freed her. However, I was very disappointed by the selfish and spiteful manner in which Kiera intervened and persuaded Simon not to grant Marissa her freedom. At that point, I decided not to act to free her.

      If I had met Marissa, I should hardly have found her likable. I would find her interesting, however.

      Mick

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  2. Tal Emma,

    It would be interesting to see both a Gorean Man and Woman cope with life on Earth. I know various stories have alluded to Gorean Men being on Earth, but that is it. Presumably the Gorean Men are there to act as Agents for either the Priest Kings or Kurii, but we have never had a story which tells us how they cope.

    How would you cope with being sent back, possibly with Brinn, now you have been away for what 8-10 years? Fifty years ago, you could have come back and society would not have changed that much, the pace of technological change is now such that being away for 10 years would leave you baffled.

    I did like Kiera's explanations of Port Kar, its surroundings, and the use of timber etc. One of the things I always found good about Norman's original series was the amount of research that he must have done to make it realistic.

    If Marissa was sent to Earth, I would think that she would find it very difficult, who could accompany her? She would need an Earth girl to keep her straight. The fact that Marissa is a haughty bitch is actually not that big a problem, there are plenty on Earth. She would not understand how to cross a road, get a train, how to shop. Kiera would run away if sent, what would you do if sent? You have children on Gor. Kiera would be the obvious choice as she is recent arrival on Gor, but is as I said unreliable.

    Any way all thoughts for the future, perhaps.

    Donna of Dover

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    1. Funny you should suggest that, Mistress, as it's a theme for a novel I've spoken to chloeK about over the last couple of years. This isn't going to be written any time soon, and if and when it does get written it is likely to be the very last Emma story in series chronological order, but there may eventually be a book entitled Exiles of Gor in which The Priest Kings send Brinn in command of a small hand picked 'kill team' of elite Gorean warriors to Earth to carry out assassinations of high ranking Kurii agents on that planet, because if you've read the Christmas Rachel novella you know that while Emma has been on Gor, the Kurii have been slowly but surely infiltrating the power base of Earth. Obviously Brinn and his warriors would be fish out of water on a near future Earth and so Emma would be assigned to go with them to help them adapt to this technological and polluted world for the duration of their mission. The other character that would be with the team would be Emma's (now adult, 18/19 year old) daughter, Jacinta, despite Emma's strident objections. Brinn and Jacinta's reactions to Earth of (say) 2037 would make for interesting reading and as you rightly say, the Earth that Emma would return to would be very different from the one she left...

      Don't hold your breath waiting for it though, Mistress. as it's not being written any time soon, and the direction of the series may possibly shift as time goes by to make that idea less likely if I go down different roads with my storytelling.

      I'm not sure Marissa could cope with Earth. She would probably think it bleak, noisy, foul, polluted, crowded, urban, and scandalous. That goes for most Gorean women. She would probably be ill for the first few months until she got used to our dirty air. But yes, being a haughty bitch wouldn't be a disadvantage on Earth. She'd probably fit right in. :)

      And yes, John Norman's world building is one of his strong points. One of the fun things about writing my stories is that I have so much source material to dip into, and so many exotic locations to exploit. There are still whole swathes of known Gor that I've not even touched on.

      If I did go back to Earth the first thing I would do, Mistress, other than binge drink coffee in my favourite cafe in London and hit the shops to buy a new wardrobe (Karen Millen outfits! Yay!), would be to find out how Game of Thrones ended. It's infuriating that I haven't found any Earth girls on Gor who watched the last few seasons!

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  3. Tal Emma,

    Many thanks for your long message.

    Please find below some ideas for you to consider, I will split this up as I think that it will get to be very long.

    Firstly, the other day, I wrote about how I thought that you might be returned to Brinn. One of Norman’s strengths is the caste system and I said that as a member of the caste of builders I would approach Brinn for work and offer you as a bribe. Have you ever thought about how the Caste of Builders construct all the bridges etc., in Gorean cities? It takes tremendous technical knowledge, there has never been mention of computers etc., so presumably all calculations are done using logbooks? My own caste is the Caste of Geodesists. Geodesy is the science of calculating the shape and gravity field of the earth. A sub-caste is that of the land surveyor. We have no mention in any of Norman’s books about surveying instruments or how the builders go about lifting beams etc., there is, I think, an indication that electric light exists. If I was to buy you and having spoken to you over a period of time and decided to set off for the Sardar, I would use your literacy to help my business, hopefully, you could learn to draw maps, plot survey observations etc. In fact there is no hopefully about it, the whip would win.

    I would keep you hooded when we were within a week’s travel of the Sardar, so you didn’t be silly and try to escape. I can imagine the reactions when Brinn took you out of the sack, you would, of course, have been hooded, gagged, placed in the modality of the silent slave girl. My conditions for offering you to Brinn, would be that when I signed you over to him, the scroll would say that if Brinn was killed you would be freed, I got either a literate native Gorean slave girl in exchange for me to teach surveying, or of Brinn had an Earth Slave girl who was already a surveyor then I take her. The whip would teach her to be literate in Gorean. I would also want to borrow you for about 2 weeks, to help train up your replacement.

    Secondly, we know that Gorean medicine is more advanced in many respects to that of Earth, we have on Gor public brothels, paga taverns etc., where slaves are used by multiple men, but we never hear of venereal disease. Is that because Norman left it out to develop at a later stage, simply could not be bothered, or do paga sluts get rounded up once a week and taken to the Caste of Physicians for examination?

    Thirdly, you mention Jacinta will be an adult if Exiles of Gor is ever written. She is a Free Woman so presumably volunteered to go to Earth. However, you are a slave girl, Jacinta and her brother are now about 5 years old, you did say in an earlier book that you would have to call them Master and Mistress when they reached puberty. How are you going to deal with them in their stroppy teenage years? At some stage as their mother you will wish to rebuke them for their behaviour, would they accept that from a slave girl, would Jacinta actually beat you for insolence, what would Brinn do?

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    1. So, to reply to the first of your three posts, Mistress...

      I confess I've never heard of Geodesy but it sounds impressive. I can confirm that the caste of builders use advanced equipment to construct their towers, cylinders and complex buildings because of course Brinn had his estate built from scratch to his specifications. The builders who were employed to design and manage the product employed equipment that to the average Gorean must have resembled some alien science. They do indeed have energy bulbs that work without being connected to a power grid. They are of course exempt from many of the Priest King technology laws, as are the physicians. It is interesting that as a caste they keep heir secrets close to their chests and it is I believe a serious offence for a builder to disclose how they do what they do to a non-caste member.

      Brinn was impressed anyway, and he's usually only impressed by how quickly you can draw a sword from a scabbard.

      Mistress would be amply rewarded by Brinn, I think, if she was to bring me back to the Sardar, hooded, gagged and bound, though I assure Mistress such strict restraints would not be necessary at all. I assure Mistress that I am a very well behaved slave.

      Venereal diseases are rare on Gor simply because the medicine is advanced beyond Earth medicine. The caste of physicians have developed simple remedies for the wide range of diseases and because these remedies are so easily available and cheap there is little opportunity for diseases to be transmitted, simply because there are few carriers. Cases of disease do of course occur occasionally. I remember a slave called Mayana on the estate had Chlamydia when she arrived from a market place, but as soon as it was identified, an antibiotic in tablet form was administered that killed the bacteria completely in 12 hours and went on to repair the damage done. I was impressed. I was told that the girl would not be able to contract Chlamydia again for the space of three to five years.

      With regards to my daughter, Jacinta, you are quite right, Mistress. Gorean tradition for women means that when Jacinta bleeds for the first time, she will be the subject of her first robing – that time when the women of her family dress her in the garments of the free woman and teach her the ways of the robes and veils in a private ceremony along with other secrets that are passed down from the older women to the younger ones. She will be initiated into their secrets. From that moment on she is expected to comport herself with dignity and modesty and she is no longer a young child even though she will essentially be an immature teenager. And from that moment on I will be expected to address her as Mistress. I don't honestly know how I am going to cope with that. She will have switch rights over me, and I will have to accord her the same respect I would do to any free man or woman. Whatever happens it will not change the love I have for her.

      I will not be able to discipline her in any way, verbally or physically. Quite the opposite in fact. How she will deal with all of this, I don't know. In theory I can talk to Brinn and he can choose to discipline her himself, but I cannot do so directly.

      At the age of 16 Jacinta will be an adult with all the rights and responsibilities of an adult free woman. At that age she can own property, including her own slaves and she can choose to enter into free companionship for the space of a year at a time.

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  4. Tal Emma,

    I am going to write this bit as if I was your Controller when you and Brinn are sent to Earth in the future. In doing this I will be assumed to have at least the Second Knowledge, if not higher, to have questioned you and other loyal barbarian slave girls, to have spoken to male agents such as you father, and have barbarian slave girls of my own to interrogate, and have access to reports for our agents on Earth. I might even have visited earth myself. I am going to consider who should go, what steps should be taken to protect them and prevent the mission going awry. Once again these are ideas for you to consider, nor are they in any logical order.

    You said that Brinn was to kill high ranking Kurii Agents. Presumably, these are either Earthmen or Gorean men stationed on earth by the Kurii or are they Kurii as well? What weapons do they have, firearms? How well are the Gorean men assimilated? Can they pass basically unnoticed?

    Is the mission just to kill, or gain intelligence, turn agents, will a honey trap be necessary?

    What attributes do I need in my team, have any been to Earth? Are they loyal to The Priest Kings?

    If I send an earth slave girl will she do a runner? What friendly agents do we have on Earth?

    Send members of the Caste of Warriors. Do they need firearms training on Earth and how do we get them that?

    Will going to Earth have an effect on their health and fitness to do the job? Do we need an induction/assimilation period? And for how long?

    Gorean men are used to having slave girls about the place. Therefore, send slave girls with them, but either Earth slave girls who have proved their loyalty to Gor, have something to lose by not returning to Gor, and native Gorean Slave Girls. Sending an Earth Slave girl like Kiera would risk her trying to escape. Furthermore, if it is necessary to get a girl to honey trap a man, would a Free Woman get into bed with the target. A slave girl can be ordered to sleep with a man. I do have to say would Brinn order you to sleep with a targeted man if he thought it necessary?

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    1. So for your second set of points, Mistress...

      As far as I'm concerned any mission to assassinate high ranking targets on Earth would be a suicide run (for the warriors at least) with little to no hope of them getting out alive. Brinn and the others are likely to die in the process. You can understand then Mistress why I would be dead set against it and I would NOT want my daughter to be any part of it.

      My understanding from things that Brinn has said when we've lain in bed together after (ahem) mutual pleasure, the Priest Kings no longer have the resources to fully protect both Gor and Earth. They are overstretched and Earth suffers as a result. Many of their agents on Earth operate without direct lines of communication and supplies to the Nest and this has allowed the Kurii to secure a beachhead of sorts on Earth and hunt down and 'burn' these pockets of Priest King agents who are very much on the back foot on Earth. From there the Kurii are spreading their influence, hoping to eventually use Earth as a launch pad against Gor.

      A kill team arriving from Gor would be able to call upon some existing networks and resources, but there is no way of knowing how many remain in good health and how many have been compromised.

      Warriors would almost certainly be trained with firearms, most likely in the Nest. They would also receive inoculations against Earth borne diseases and pollution.

      They are men, Mistress, and they will want slave girls. I suspect they will procure these girls on planet itself rather than bring them over from Gor, but it is possible they might bring a couple of reliable First Girls with them to oversee training and discipline of the local girls they choose to enslave. I suspect they would keep these girls in a reasonably private and secluded house that would be their base of operations. This is speculation on my part of course.

      Brinn wouldn't have any hesitation in ordering me to sleep with someone if he felt it might prove useful to the mission. I am kajira after all. I would do so without hesitation. I do not wish to be whipped.

      Again, I think any such plan to send a kill team to Earth would be of the utmost risk and about as dangerous as anything could be.

      There is no way, no way whatsoever I would stand by and allow Brinn to bring a grown up Jacinta with him. That is a red line for me. No one endangers my beautiful daughter. No one.

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  5. Tal Emma

    Sorry Google forced me to split this up.

    Do we send Free Women, reading Rachel’s Christmas tale earth woman are being forced to be more modest in their dress sense, not a return to Victorian standards yet, but will it happen, that would make it easier for Gorean Free Women to fit in. Can a Free Woman do things a slave girl cannot on Earth.

    If we send a loyal Earth Slave Girl, how long has she been away from Earth, does she need an induction period? What about her health? We can probably assume that any barbarian slave girl sent back will have some native immunity remaining but depending on how long she has been away her knowledge of Earth ways will be out of date. As an example, when I was a child, my parents had one of the few telephones on the street, and TV was black and white with only two channels.

    Language, presumably we will send the team to the barbarian slave girls’ native country, so she at least speaks the language, although native speakers will realise that she either is not native or has been away a very long time. How about the language skills of the rest of the team? They will no doubt speak English with an accent, that will be recognised. So, where do we say they come from, 30 years ago I would say that they could be Eastern European, in the UK, we had very few so would get away with being Polish. Today, you might say you were Polish in a shop, and be spoken to in Polish blowing your cover. Is Gorean a guttural Germanic/Slavic type language or more Italian? I thought about saying that the team were Romansch, ( i.e. native Swiss) speakers, it is unlikely that anyone would question that or realise that they were not speaking Romansch.

    What part of the country do we insert the team into, a small village, country town or big city? The village is out as you would stick out like sore thumb. The big city although allowing you to disappear will be overwhelming for the Goreans So a town like Dover, ok my home stone, or Salisbury, big enough so the team does not stick out but not overwhelming.

    Transport, can the barbarian slave drive a car? Will need to teach the rest of the team. Although saying that will driverless cars be the norm in the future. That brings its own problems, they will be tracked, we ought to assume that the Kurii will be able to track cars at will and once they know that the team has a car, the team is compromised. Do they learn to ride a horse, although riding a horse in any thing but a village or very small town would bring you to notice?

    Assuming that it will not always be possible to assassinate a target with a sword, do you teach all the team to use firearms, and where? Do we have agents in the Cheviots for example? All the team including the women need to be taught, not just for self-defence either.

    So, I think a small team or perhaps several self-contained teams, and the team only knows its own members. The team leader will know the man he reports to and no other. No more than three teams reporting to any single man.

    An assimilation period of at least three weeks in a small town, learn to drive, use public transport, acclimatise, I can just imagine Brinn dealing with an officious traffic warden, a trip to the big city. The assimilation period to be conducted by a local agent who has the authority to authorise the start of the mission.

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    1. All the points you make, Mistress, are extremely valid and underline precisely why I think any such plan would be a suicide run with little hope of success.

      It is madness.

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  6. Wow, Mistress you offer the kid of feedback to stories that authors can only dream of! For the record, writers such as myself are really inspired by feedback. What we do we do for free, and we don't expect anything much back, but when we get great feedback, as I have recently from you and Master Mick, that really makes it all worthwhile, so thank you.

    You raise lots of great points and ask many interesting questions so if you'll excuse me I'll take time to compose a detailed reply before I post anything back.

    But I just wanted to say now thank you very much for all the feedback recently (and that goes for Master Mick too). :)

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  7. Tal Emma,

    Many thanks for all your lengthy replies. If I was to buy you and return you to Brinn, you would be hooded and kept in a sack for the last week of approach to the Sardar so you did not gain what might prove to be false hopes if we were attacked, be inattentive to your duties etc, and imagine the surprise and joy for you, Brinn, Jacinta and your son when Brinn undid the sack.

    Going on about Gorean medical advances, I have never seen any references to the purification of water. If you are on Earth, it is necessary to purify water from a stream before drinking it, so you do not get Weil's Disease etc., I cannot imagine that water from a Gorean river is exactly pure, after all urts etc., will drink from the stream, urinate in it, cholera is a waterborne disease on Earth,, yes boiling water will kill germs, but men will drink from the same stream as an animal.

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    1. It will probably come as little surprise to the kind and gracious Mistress that I don't quite share her enthusiasm for hooding slaves and then placing them in full body sacks during transport. I realise I may have some personal bias on the matter though and of course I understand that I am kajira and therefore my preferences need not concern a free woman in the slightest.

      There are several answers to your question re: the suitability of drinking water on Gor.

      First I should perhaps mention that I have superior antibodies thanks to the Kur science that rebuilt me, and it would take an extremely virulent germ to survive inside my body for more than a few hours. But I recognise that isn't the case for everyone else.

      Goreans don't drink as much water as you might think. They tend to drink low alcohol versions of ka-la-na and paga which due to the fermentation process renders it safer to drink than water. A similar thing took place in our own ancient history on Earth. But obviously water is drunk too. Goreans obviously have stronger resistance to the bugs in fresh water because they have lived with it rather than the purified tap water of Earth. The cities employ some advanced filtration systems for the hand pumps on central streets thanks to the genius of your caste, Mistress, so often that water is as clean as the water in England.

      Drinking from rivers is less clean, but again the Goreans who live outside of the cities have built up a resistance over centuries that we do not have. I have seen cases of vomiting – whether it is due to badly cooked food or the water, I do not know, but in each case the remedy was simple and readily available from the caste of physicians, often in tablet or powder form. Their advanced medicine means no one is likely to die from bacteria in water unless they were in a remote area where they couldn't obtain medicine in time.

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