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“You’re looking very different
today, Caitlin,” said the woman who was now passing herself off as
Rebecca Miles. “Makeup, short summer dress, high heels, perfume,
why I’d almost think that love must be in the air for you? A new
boyfriend perhaps? A new boyfriend with exacting standards in women?”
She smiled as she poured me a refill of coffee in her Docklands flat.
“I’m seeing someone,” I said as I
handed her more dossier notes that I had put together on Adam’s
computer now that my laptop was in the hands of Kassa. “He likes me
to be pretty.”
“He likes you to be feminine,” said
Rebecca as she perused the file I had given her. “I know that type
of man every well indeed. I was a kept woman, remember? A trophy
wife.”
The file contained a full accounting of
my work to date including full details of the House of Three Moons.
It’s what Rebecca had paid me for after all. I pocketed another
thick wad of twenty pound notes that would never be declared for tax
purposes.
“It’s my belief you’re going to
be abducted in the next three days,” I said. “You may be kept for
a short period of time in the basement of that house in Hampstead
Lane where they have slave kennels. You will then be taken to a
location in the New Forest, a couple of miles outside Burley. The
site has been prepared already and it will be the designated landing
zone for the silver ship. The location is changed for each pick up.
This will be sometime after midnight in the early hours before anyone
is awake. You and a number of other girls will be loaded aboard as
cargo. I think you know the routine well enough. And then you’ll be
shipped to Gor to start a new life as a slave girl.”
Rebecca looked understandably
frightened as she read the notes. I had emphasised the power and
ruthlessness of these men and the apparent resources and influence
they commanded.
“Your options are very limited, but
there are options, and I’m here to discuss them with you.” I
moved my left leg slightly and noticed how Rebecca glanced at the
steel ring about my left ankle. The high heeled pumps I wore made it
impossible to disguise the fact that I had a metal ring locked upon
me. I wondered whether Rebecca knew the significance of the ankle
ring? I had no idea how much her former husband had told her of the
operational procedures of the Kurii slavers. Hopefully not that much.
“Under normal circumstances I’d
advise you to go to the police and make a full disclosure, but that
would mean telling them who you really are and that in turn will flag
your name in the system and by your own admission there’s a Kurii
death squad that wants to clean up loose ends. The police who would
speak to you initially would almost certainly not be part of this
conspiracy, but I can’t guarantee that they wouldn’t quickly be
replaced by policemen who were part of the conspiracy.”
“Going to the police is out of the
question,” said Rebecca. She had lit another cigarette when I began
to detail the main points from my dossier. “We can’t involve
them.”
“Okay, then you can try to run and
hide. Do you have resources you can fall back on other than this
flat?”
“A few. There are places I could
relocate to, but many are overseas and it’s impossible for me to
leave the country as I don’t have a passport in the Rebecca Miles
name. I have nothing to prove who I am so if I run I can’t even
rent somewhere or take a job.”
“Your lack of papers is a real
issue,” I agreed. In this day and age it was getting very hard to
do anything without a paper trail identity. While she obviously had a
suitcase of cash stashed away somewhere, not everything could be paid
for in cash without raising suspicions.
“So I’m going to offer a possible
solution. It’s going to cost you though.”
“What do you have in mind, Caitlin?”
“I happen to know men who can help
you. I shouldn’t really be telling you this, but they are agents of
the Priest Kings so not only do they know your predators but they are
opposed to them. Their network and resources isn’t what it once
was, but I’m confident they could get you out of the country and
set you up with a new paper trail identity somewhere safe. I could
arrange all of this.” In actual fact I hadn’t mentioned any of
this to Adam and Mark yet, but I was sure I could swing it for
reasons that I was about to outline to Rebecca stroke Jennifer.
“They would help me?” Rebecca
grasped at the suggestion like a drowning girl would grasp at a piece
of drift wood.
“Well, they wouldn’t do it for
free. Like I said, there would be a cost involved.”
“I have some money. How much?”
“Not money. Well, money for me. I’m
going to charge you ten thousand pounds for arranging this. Consider
it a bonus for the shit you put me through. But the men I know will
be motivated by something else.”
“I don’t know what else I can offer
if they don’t want money.”
“I think you do.” I smiled. “I’ve
had this nagging thought at the back of my mind since our last
conversation. You know how it is when you’re sure you missed
something important, but you can't quite grasp what that something
might be. I’ve got an analytical mind which works on problems in my
sub conscious and then, pop, without any warning I suddenly think of
a solution. It’s good for my job. There was something you said last
time around that I didn't pick up on right away.”
“Oh?” Rebecca tapped some ash into
the ashtray.
“You pleaded with your husband to
share Carousel with you.”
“He refused,” said Rebecca.
“Yes, but that had to mean he had
more than one dose of Carousel. That didn't click with me first time
around. I had a lot on my mind. The Kurii had given him enough for
two. Your husband didn’t choose to share, but he had to have had
enough to share, otherwise why would you have pleaded your case?”
Rebecca said nothing as she sat there
looking at me.
“You knew there were two doses, so
you asked for one of them, and he refused you. So yes, after the
death squad killed him you took a dose of Carousel from the hiding
place in your mansion, but there were two doses, so one remains?”
Rebecca smiled.
“You have the second dose, don’t
you? You’d hardly have left it behind. It’s worth a fortune to
the highest bidder. Was that your plan, to replace the fortune you
would have inherited with another fortune when you could sell the
remaining dose of Carousel? I’m guessing you know many of the men
who worked for the Kurii at the same time your husband did? You
mentioned you were, how did you put it, complicit in much of his
work? You would have known these men socially over the decades? All
those decadent rich parties? For all I know you slept with some of
those men to hedge your bets. Do you have some of them on speed
dial?”
“I can see I chose well when I hired
you, Caitlin. You’re very good.”
“Thank you. So that's your way out of
this. The men I know, the Priest King agents, they will help you in
return for the remaining dose of Carousel.”
Rebecca laughed. “You are asking an
awful lot. This is the most valuable prize that exists on Earth. The
richest most powerful men would pay any price to possess it. You’re
asking too much, Caitlin.”
“What price do you put on your
freedom? To not being a slave girl on Gor?”
“And if I agree to this? If I agree
to your price?”
“I will put you in touch with the
Priest King agents. They will make arrangements to get you safely
away with a new identity that will hold up to any scrutiny. You will
be free to enjoy your second chance at life. But you haven’t long
to decide. The slave ship arrives and departs in three days. You are
earmarked as part of its cargo.”
“Why do the Priest King agents want
this serum? The Priest Kings must already have it.”
“They have their reasons.” I wasn’t
going to tell Rebecca that Adam and Mark hadn’t heard from the
Sardar in years and that they too wanted to profit from the riches
that the serum could bring. For me this meant an end to the whole
affair, because once Adam had his hands on the treasure he sought
there would no longer be any need to pursue this reckless
infiltration of the House of Three Moons. If I could give Adam what
he wanted then this nightmare might be over at last. And then what? I
would ask for a new identity too. Adam would possibly want me to go
with him, but was that what I really wanted? Did I want to live in a
slave relationship with him on some sun kissed private island?
Everything was happening too quickly for me to come to terms with any
of it. I didn’t know what I wanted. The sex was good, very good,
but could I let him actually collar me?
I didn’t have these thoughts when I
lay in bed with him. When he had me chained in his bed things were a
lot simpler. But when I was away from Adam my independence reasserted
itself. I would have to be his slave if I wanted to spend my life
with him. In fact he already thought of me as his slave. But I felt
sure that if I told him this couldn’t go on, he would accept that.
After all, this was Earth, not Gor. He couldn't actually keep me as a
slave if I refused such a thing, could he? He would have to respect
my wishes, my independence, my say in the matter.
Or would he? Just how Gorean was his
mindset now?
What if he decided that I didn’t have
a say in the matter?
What if he kept me as his slave girl
irrespective of what I wanted?
No, that was an insane concept. It
could never happen. Adam would respect my ultimate decision on the
matter. I wasn’t really his property.
Not really.
“I suppose I don’t really have any
choice then. Tell these men they will have Carousel if they can
guarantee my safety from the Kurii.”
“I’ll let them know and we’ll be
back in touch very soon, probably in the next twelve hours. I expect
you’ll have to be ready to move once we do. They have some safe
houses in London, built underground, and we’ll probably move you
there. It will be very quick when it happens so pack whatever things
you need to take with you, but pack light.”
“All I need is my youth, and that
travels with me,” said Rebecca with a smile. “Caitlin, towards
the end of his life, before he received Carousel, Charles used to
flaunt his women before me. I’d always suspected he had affairs of
course, even before we were first married, but in the sixties and the
seventies and even into the eighties he was at least discrete.
Powerful men feel they have a right to be unfaithful and they
probably think that the wife shouldn’t complain. After all she has
her husband to thank for her rich lavish lifestyle. But in the last
years of his life Charles made no attempt to hide his promiscuity
from me. He needed Viagra by then of course. Age had withered that
once impressive cock.” Rebecca spoke as an older woman might,
reflecting back on her youth, which seemed incongruous with the way
she looked now. “They were pretty young things and they would often
be found in our house, lying by the pool side or draped over some
sofa. I hated them of course, and they were intelligent enough to
stay well away from me. My animosity towards these girls amused
Charles. Two birthdays ago he gave me a long box, beautifully gift
wrapped with a bow. Inside was a finely tooled riding whip. We had a
stable of horses so I assumed it was to replace the one I used when I
rode around our estate, but Charles smiled and said the whip was a
special present for me, because that whip he said I could use on the
flanks and buttocks of any of his girls that displeased me. He seemed
excited by the idea of giving his wife the power to administer
discipline to his harem of pretty girls. I think he wanted me to.”
“And did you?” I asked.
“No. I knew I would simply be playing
Charles’s game and I didn’t want him to be more excited by those
sluts than he already was. I could imagine how he’d probably be in
a big leather armchair masturbating as I whipped one of the girls
across her flanks. I wasn’t going to give him that.”
“Why tell me this?”
“Because the girls all had one thing
in common. They all wore the same slave ankle ring as you do. So that
means you’re a slave now doesn’t it? Were you going to tell me at
all, Caitlin? Who do you belong to?”
“One of the Priest King men,” I
said simply.
“I see. Is this because of your
involvement with me?”
“In a way.”
“Are you a natural slave, Caitlin?”
“He tells me I am.”
“Oh, Caitlin... you've fallen down
the rabbit hole.” Rebecca stubbed out her cigarette and reached for
the coffee pot. “Have you been branded yet?”
“No. And I won't be branded. I'm not
a slave.”
“Says the pretty girl with a slave
anklet that she can't remove. Your naivety is charming.”
“Ten thousand pounds for me. Don't
forget that part of the deal,” I said as I got up.
“Should I give the money to you or
your master? I mean, are you even allowed to carry money any more?”
“I am my own woman,” I said sharply
as I moved towards the door. “I'll phone you when we're ready to
meet.”
“Until then, pretty kajira,” said
Rebecca with a smile.
I am guessing she didn't clear this with Adam. No matter. What could possibly go wrong?
ReplyDeleteMatt Harris
I can't think of anything that might go wrong, Master. I'm sure it will be fine. :)
DeleteTal Emma!
ReplyDeleteI am one of your fans but have never commented before. Your writing is amazing. Your talent for plot, for pacing, for character, for gorgeous description, is remarkable. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
I think this is strange, but I am rooting for Caitlin. I hope she wins.
It looks like she is doomed to end up as somebody's slave, and the best she can hope for is to avoid serving some nameless Gorean brute by submitting to Adam (and hopefully staying someplace safe on Earth). And that's the point of Gor fiction, right? The girl always ends up happy in her collar. That's a good story! But I've read it before. A couple of times, actually.
Just once I'd like to see some Earth woman beat the Goreans... to go on and live free and happy. I'd like to see her outsmart them, despite their networks of agents, their magical technology, their brutal ruthlessness. It seems to me all that stuff could make them overconfident, and a clever woman could take advantage of that to outwit them.
I thought, at the end of Panther Girl of Gor, that that could be Rachel. I was so looking forward to reading about her and Alan going after Udumi and her goons. I was so disappointed when Udumi easily bested them in Glad Tidings.
But maybe Cat is even smarter? Even more capable? One can hope...
And if not, well... at least she will be happy in her collar. We always are.
--The Former Tayla of Philadelphia, now just plain Tayla
Hello chain-sis. I'm always excited when someone posts for the first time, so thank you very much. I'd offer you a welcome pan of ka-la-na but that's really the prerogative of the free men and women to offer, not me. ;)
DeleteThe first thing I'll say is, I don't ordinarily give spoilers for future stories, but I feel obliged in this case because you're such a Rachel fan to let you know her fate isn't quite what you think. Yes it looks bad for her at the end of Glad Tidings (which it's meant to – cliffhanger damsel in distress and all that), but as she is often fond of saying, “I'm Rachel Evans. You have no idea what I'm capable of.” Trust me in advance of the New Years Eve story – she's not beaten yet and you may be surprised what happens in the eight hours directly following the end of that story. :)
I'm very much with you on what you say about women scoring some victories. I'm walking a narrow line between being faithful to the core concepts of the Gor books (and we all know what they are) while simultaneously being a little bit subversive in the way I do so. If you look back at the original trilogy, Tallia ends up enslaving the mighty Kurgus and dragging him away into the northern forests to be her sexual plaything. Erin gains her freedom and goes off in search of a Panther band to join. Rachel returns to Earth. And of course Emma saves Gor when the men fail to do so. So I try to give the women some wins.
Hopefully you'll agree Caitlin is a far more kick ass and resourceful protagonist than the average John Norman 'doormat' while still holding true to the central Gorean principles. After all, if I buck the trend too much and change the whole basis of the books then why am I writing Gor fiction at all? I may as well create my own original story universe and make money selling the stories on Amazon instead!
But yes, it's important to include strong female characters and give them some wins, for realism if nothing else. And because a succession of women who are ultimately happy to wear a collar and become a love slave becomes dull and predictable after a while. There has to be variety.
But it does still have to play fair with the Gor setting as people expect. I'm never for example going to have tribes of Panther Girls going head to head against shield walls of Gorean warriors or swords-women in chain mail bikinis swaggering around Gor drinking men under the table in paga taverns. But subversive in subtle ways I will continue to be.
I do have some rough notes for a Panther Girl story in which the central panther girl character (possibly Tallia) is a genuine hunter/predator and doesn't fall into the 'finds her slave belly' trope by the end of it. It's one of many possible tales I may tell over time.
Anyway, great hearing from you, Tayla and thank you so much for the glowing words of praise. :)
I might also add I always love it when someone says they're rooting for a character because that means that I've succeeded as a writer to make that character interesting enough for readers to sympathise/root for. If people generally care about the fates of women like Emma, Rachel and Caitlin, then I'm doing my job right.
DeleteI'm a firm believer that if a story has great characters and great dialogue, the novel can work well, even if the plot is a bit ropey in places. But a great plot that has dull characters and dull dialogue will always flounder.
Emma, Rachel, Caitlin and Kassa... more of Kassa :waves her little Kassa flag: You know, there reason why I like Kassa so much has to do with my own heritage. I grew up in Lagos in Nigeria, came to Europe being 15, and somehow I can relate to her. The guys from home are mostly different than the men here. It is a different fine line what you can say and do to them as a woman compared to most middle class European men. When you grew up with such men them do not fool you and you don't fear them, you like and love them. Kassa knows how to behave without being smacked against the next wall, because her attitude is confident but respectful. So please more about Kassa.
DeleteI have to say I'm a big Rachel fan. When I was doing the illustrations for the epilogue of Panther Girl, it took me ages to do the Rachel/Emma pic as I kept getting emotional while working on it.
DeleteIt's why I did extra pics for Glad Tidings :)
Greetings,
DeleteThanks to Tayla for bringing up an interesting, valid point as well as touching upon one of John Norman's flaws (gasp!). As Emma points out, if the stories remain faithful to John Norman's formula for female characters, we generally end up finding such characters unworthy of our sympathy and respect and conclude they got what they deserved. Be they haughty, rich, spoiled, treacherous, lazy, a "natural slave", slow learners or whatever, those traits make us less likely to root for them. Norman seems to have a small number of categories in which to put his female characters.
On the other hand for example, even though Lady Marissa doesn't cross the line into being genuinely likable for me, she is presented as someone I find interesting (not one dimensional) and having some admirable traits. I find myself rooting for her and hoping she makes a comeback from the Shadows (pun intended). Also, I suspect I will became a fan of Yishana and The Larl of the Thassa, in spite of her being at odds with a couple of our favourites. It goes without saying, Kassa and our Cat are also female characters one can find ample reason to root for. Others have their own picks.
Mick of Milford
Thanks for your thoughtful comments Emma.
DeleteI should add that I am very much aware of the line you walk, and how skillfully, you balance it. You make it look effortless. I am sure it is not.
I have loved each one of your "triumphant" Gorean women. OMG, the scene where Kirgus offers Tallia a life of civilized luxury, and then she tells him what's really going to happen... Or even better, Brinn's letter to Emma's father. How hard must that have been for him to write! And yet, under his code of honor, he could do nothing else!
And you are right of course... Even as I wrote my earlier comment I recognized that it goes against JN's deeply held philosophies... and surely those philosophies must underlie the reality of the setting he created? How can you change them and not destroy the very concept?
As others have said before, you play in his creation even better than he does. You show us how a story set on Gor can be interesting. You do it by populating it with amazing characters, and that subtle subversive streak so glaringly missing from JN's own books. And all this while staying carefully within the boundaries of what is acceptable to the setting. Like I said, it can't really be as easy as you make it look.
Finally, since you mention characters we care about... I really came to like Alan. He was interesting but necessarily a bit two dimensional in his cameo in Panther Girl. He really came into his own in Glad Tidings. Rachel's grief for him felt raw and real. Very well done. I will miss him in later works.
And I also noticed the look Rachel gave Udumi, and I knew I would have more to read in the future. I would not trade places with Udumi for anything, not even my freedom and a trip back to Earth.
--Tayla
I was actually of two minds about whether to have Alan shot at the end of Glad Tidings, chain-sis, because he worked so well with Rachel, but I needed an emotional impact for the ending. Again he was a little bit of subversion on my part towards the Gor tropes as he was a genuinely caring man who wasn't weak but didn't want to brutalise women in any way, and deeply loved Rachel, for all her flaws. I could have done a lot with him.
DeleteAnd yes, Udumi has a ruthless enemy in Rachel now. It's safe to say she lives for revenge.
Glad you like Kassa, chain-sis, uhuru. I really enjoy writing her. As you say, her philosophy to life comes from being an outsider in Briain as she grew up in a different culture where gender roles are more rigid and she didn't really comprehend her options until she moved to the West. In many ways Gor to England is a bit like England seemed compared to Poland - a new culture with new possibilities and new rules.
DeleteOh, and just to add, Chloe's depiction of Rachel was perfect somehow when I first saw it. I didn't have a fixed idea in my mind of what Rachel looked like, but when I saw her rendering I thought, yep, that's Rachel. That's how I saw her from that point on when I was writing her.
DeleteRebecca is understating things when she says Cat is naive. She is horrible naive about what she is involved in - perhaps because of personal involvement.
ReplyDeleteBut, we know the Silver Ship is coming, and when it leaves, it will carry cargo. Rebecca perhaps, Cat perhaps. Maybe she will become free and maybe a Free Companion of Mark of Ar. That would be an interesting turnabout
-Northern Tracker.
The silver ship is indeed coming. :)
DeleteI, for one, am still rooting for Caitlin and that they get some sort of "win" against the House of the 3 moons. Even if she remains Adams slave, getting the anklet off would work.
ReplyDeleteMatt Harris
I think everyone is rooting for some sort of win for our heroes, no matter how pyrrhic.
DeleteWhat a relief to find that Emma is still writing and Chloe is still illustrating! I had about given up hope as the months went by after the "late 2018" release date of Ubara of Gor. But I kept checking this blog every few months, just in case you re-appeared. And then yesterday, I discovered that there were three months of new posts!
ReplyDeleteWell, that pretty much ruined the rest of the day yesterday for doing anything other than read the adventures of Kiera and Caitlin, and enjoy Chloe's wonderful illustrations of Daughter of God and Kiera of Gor. The body of work that Emma and Chloe have created is truly marvelous: well-written, engaging characters, captivating plots, and all brought to life through superb illustrations.
I do think, however, that Emma has earned more time at the Larl's prow. It is completely inappropriate behavior to leave her faithful readers hanging while she goes off gallivanting around Europe for four days.
As for Caitlin's fate... I'm rooting for her to take down the House of the 3 Moons, help restore the Priest Kings to power on Earth, and find fulfillment as Adam's love slave.
jonnieo
That fate works for me...
DeleteI am sure Emma is just being obedient to her Master's will; if she had her druthers she would be sating our fanfiction appetites.
Matt Harris
A new Master! Greetings, Master Jonnieo. And welcome to the growing comments section. I'll see that a silken serving girl brings you some ka-la-na. :)
DeleteThat's a big ask for Caitlin... she's resourceful and plucky, but restore the Priest Kings to power on Earth? :)
Hopefully the kind master is fully engrossed in catching up with the huge body of work from the last three months and will be so busy reading that that he'll hardly miss a long weekend of story posts for Slave World and re-consider hanging a hard working girl from the Larl's prow?
Greetings master and thanks for the kind words about the art.
DeleteSadly the Larl is in for refit. I wasn't happy with the design of the prow / figurehead so I'm redoing it. Probably with rings in the ears to make things easier :)